ODE TO FOOTBALL
ODE FOOTBALL How exciting
You are as the sweat running
Down my face
ODE FOOTBALL The pain you feel
As another human being
Hits against you
ODE FOOTBALL The sight of
People being decimated
ODE FOOTBALL As I see
My next victim
ODE FOOTBALL As the heat of the
Football spinning in the air like the
Tires on a car accelerating
ODE FOOTBALL Here comes the
BOOOOM!!!
Their goes the ball
Here comes the Thropy
ODE FOOTBALL The
Football is my key
BY ANDY AMBROISE
Simile, onomatopoeia, Metaphor, alliteration
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love the lines: Football spinning in the air like the
Tires on a car accelerating